literature

His words

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Literature Text

And if, perhaps one day,
His words weigh any weight,
Then they might just leave a scratch
Just something that came to mind after a breakup.
Would love to know what you think or if you liked it :)
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British-Prophetess's avatar
Hi there! I've chosen you as the 178th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week :D (Big Grin)

I think most of us have felt this way during a romantic break up. I think in the many fews/months following up a failed relationship you start to wonder what exactly when wrong and you start to replay what they said in your head, only to hurt yourself. But after a while it gradually starts to become more better and all that. I really like how emotional and truthful this was as a poem :)